Copy Edit the World

1. My green sheet for SCWK 120
Error: "Class: Tues., 9:00am-11:45am"
Correction: "Class: Tues., 9:00 a.m.-11:45 a.m."


2. News article from San Jose Mercury: "Drought still on tap..." from my top news assignment
Error: Right at the beginning, there is a fragment. "It's been nice. But not enough."
Correction: "It's been nice, but it hasn't been enough."


3. Church bulletin from my church back home
Error: "What aspect of God's comitment to us are you most thankful for today?"
Correction: "What aspect of God's commitment to us are you most thankful for today?"