Local Amtrack train, the Colonial, collides with three Conrail locomotives, at a switch that merges four trains into two, that apparently ran a stop sign, Amtrack spokesman, Larry Chase says. All northbound trains collided at 1:30 today near Chase, Maryland.
**For tomorrow's newspaper, I would change 1:30 today to 1:30 yesterday**
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Make it past tense -- it's already happened. Unclear: "at a switch that merges four trains into two, that apparently ran a stop sign." Your last sentence makes it even more confusing. You need to rewrite this for clarity.
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