Wednesday, February 11, 2009
News Story #2: Robbery
Two airline employees from a Taiwanese airline, 28-year-old Weiming Chen and 30-year-old Li Lu, were robbed at gunpoint while taking pictures at the Saint Mary's Cathedral's lower parking lot after separating from their tour group at 10 a.m. today, Sgt. Lawrence Price from the San Francisco Police Department stated. The thief, who was described as around 18 and wearing a black jacket and gloves, stole $100 in cash, a credit card, their passports, camera, and airline tickets before running away and may have caused the couple to miss their 1 p.m. flight back to Taipei with the rest of the airline employees.
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Don't use an immediate ID lead for people who are not well known, like these two tourists.
ReplyDeleteYour lead sentence is five miles long! So is your second one. And that's all there is. Break them up!
And how about some paragraphs!
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